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		<title>Comment on Writers &#8230;Beware!!! by Jim Spence</title>
		<link>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/03/29/writers-beware/#comment-108</link>
		<pubDate>Mon, 12 Oct 2009 10:17:29 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>&lt;strong&gt;Jim Spence...&lt;/strong&gt;

I was searching for Blogs about Jonas Silverio &#124; Bad Bad Teacher and found this site.  I am interested in your content and I appreciate sites like this....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>Jim Spence&#8230;</strong></p>
<p>I was searching for Blogs about Jonas Silverio | Bad Bad Teacher and found this site.  I am interested in your content and I appreciate sites like this&#8230;.
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		<title>Comment on Writers &#8230;Beware!!! by Luc</title>
		<link>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/03/29/writers-beware/#comment-73</link>
		<pubDate>Sat, 03 Oct 2009 01:47:04 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>&lt;p&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Luc...&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Michael Jackson, the king of pop who was ruling the %global music% business...
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		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>Luc&#8230;</strong></p>
<p>Michael Jackson, the king of pop who was ruling the %global music% business&#8230;
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		<title>Comment on Am I being oversensitive about rubbish people write by dallas aquarium texas</title>
		<link>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/05/19/am-i-being-oversensitive-about-rubbish-people-write/#comment-69</link>
		<pubDate>Sat, 12 Sep 2009 09:45:21 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>&lt;strong&gt;dallas aquarium texas...&lt;/strong&gt;

Your topic Babyccino " What are you making for dinner tonight? was interesting when I found it on Saturday searching for dallas aquarium texas...</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>dallas aquarium texas&#8230;</strong></p>
<p>Your topic Babyccino &#8221; What are you making for dinner tonight? was interesting when I found it on Saturday searching for dallas aquarium texas&#8230;
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		<title>Comment on American Actor Looking for work by Los Campesinos new album</title>
		<link>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/03/01/american-actor-looking-for-work/#comment-55</link>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Apr 2009 21:23:41 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>&lt;strong&gt;Los Campesinos. Youtube hot...&lt;/strong&gt;

The band gave their first concert on 8 May 2006 at a school club night; they went on to play a number of increasingly well-received gigs around Cardiff....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>Los Campesinos. Youtube hot&#8230;</strong></p>
<p>The band gave their first concert on 8 May 2006 at a school club night; they went on to play a number of increasingly well-received gigs around Cardiff&#8230;.
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		<title>Comment on The Ancestral Trail by paololita</title>
		<link>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2009/01/01/the-ancestral-trail/#comment-53</link>
		<pubDate>Sat, 21 Mar 2009 02:37:43 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>This series was just magical.
Do anyone know why the first numbers got printed in two different versions? I have the second issue with storyline, drawings, and even cover drawing different than the regular edition</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>This series was just magical.<br />
Do anyone know why the first numbers got printed in two different versions? I have the second issue with storyline, drawings, and even cover drawing different than the regular edition
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		<title>Comment on PERPETRATING TALENT AGENT SCAM by transformers the movie</title>
		<link>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/02/18/perpetrating-talent-agent-scam/#comment-35</link>
		<pubDate>Fri, 25 May 2007 20:17:30 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/02/18/perpetrating-talent-agent-scam/#comment-35</guid>
					<description>&lt;strong&gt;transformers the movie...&lt;/strong&gt;

The build is durable and cannot be changed flat if a new cog is transformers the movie....</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p><strong>transformers the movie&#8230;</strong></p>
<p>The build is durable and cannot be changed flat if a new cog is transformers the movie&#8230;.
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		<title>Comment on Shocking UP-FRONT FEE Results! by Lyndie</title>
		<link>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/02/16/shocking-up-front-fee-results/#comment-10</link>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Feb 2007 16:57:55 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/02/16/shocking-up-front-fee-results/#comment-10</guid>
					<description>No matter what area you get into, dancing, modelling or writing it's the same process.&lt;strong&gt; A bad agent is worse than no agent at all.&lt;/strong&gt; A really bad agent is worse than not being a writer, dancer, actor or singer, the same will apply. Getting past the “no unagented submissions” barrier is not sufficient justification for hooking up with a bad agent.

The easiest time to get an agent is when you’ve just gotten an offer on a book or gig. The editor or producer phones you and says, “I want your work!”

From a writer's aspect, the following will apply:-

“Wow! Gosh! Gee Whiz!” you say coherently. Then you thank the editor, make sure you have their correct phone number, and tell them you’ll get right back to them. Call the agent who’s your first choice. Politely explain that you’ve just gotten an offer, and would they be interested in having you as a client? If they say they’re not interested, call your second choice. It’s hard to imagine your having to call a third choice. You’re offering them a commission on a book you sold.

It’s harder if you haven’t sold a book. Selling short stories helps. Having a really good novel in hand also helps.

(If you’ve never sold anything, and one of the top agents in the genre not only takes you on as a client, but gives you his Saturday-night dinner timeslot at the next Worldcon, please believe that he’s taking your prospects very seriously indeed. You know who you are.)

Least appreciated fact about agents: There are very few real ones. Of the gormless, the not very helpful, and the confirmed scammers, there are a great many.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>No matter what area you get into, dancing, modelling or writing it&#8217;s the same process.<strong> A bad agent is worse than no agent at all.</strong> A really bad agent is worse than not being a writer, dancer, actor or singer, the same will apply. Getting past the “no unagented submissions” barrier is not sufficient justification for hooking up with a bad agent.</p>
<p>The easiest time to get an agent is when you’ve just gotten an offer on a book or gig. The editor or producer phones you and says, “I want your work!”</p>
<p>From a writer&#8217;s aspect, the following will apply:-</p>
<p>“Wow! Gosh! Gee Whiz!” you say coherently. Then you thank the editor, make sure you have their correct phone number, and tell them you’ll get right back to them. Call the agent who’s your first choice. Politely explain that you’ve just gotten an offer, and would they be interested in having you as a client? If they say they’re not interested, call your second choice. It’s hard to imagine your having to call a third choice. You’re offering them a commission on a book you sold.</p>
<p>It’s harder if you haven’t sold a book. Selling short stories helps. Having a really good novel in hand also helps.</p>
<p>(If you’ve never sold anything, and one of the top agents in the genre not only takes you on as a client, but gives you his Saturday-night dinner timeslot at the next Worldcon, please believe that he’s taking your prospects very seriously indeed. You know who you are.)</p>
<p>Least appreciated fact about agents: There are very few real ones. Of the gormless, the not very helpful, and the confirmed scammers, there are a great many.
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		<title>Comment on The difference between &#8220;Hooks&#8221; and &#8220;Synopsis&#8221; by Support1</title>
		<link>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/02/18/the-difference-between-hooks-and-synopsis/#comment-9</link>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Feb 2007 14:28:30 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/02/18/the-difference-between-hooks-and-synopsis/#comment-9</guid>
					<description>In the US, it's customary to query agents before submitting anything. The query contains the hook, so it's a mini-synopsis in the cover letter - a paragraph or two where you try to interest the agent. Then when the agent requests the manuscript and synopsis, you obviously send the full synopsis.

In the UK, you normally send first three chapters plus synopsis with a query, but you still put a hook in your cover letter. Maybe it's less important for it to tick all those Miss Snark boxes (introduce protagonist, introduce antagonist, etc) because you have your full synopsis enclosed. I don't know, though. It's still likely to be the first thing that gets read, so I suppose you want it to be as intriguing as possible.

I don't really know the answer to your question, but I hope that helps.

Good luck!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>In the US, it&#8217;s customary to query agents before submitting anything. The query contains the hook, so it&#8217;s a mini-synopsis in the cover letter - a paragraph or two where you try to interest the agent. Then when the agent requests the manuscript and synopsis, you obviously send the full synopsis.</p>
<p>In the UK, you normally send first three chapters plus synopsis with a query, but you still put a hook in your cover letter. Maybe it&#8217;s less important for it to tick all those Miss Snark boxes (introduce protagonist, introduce antagonist, etc) because you have your full synopsis enclosed. I don&#8217;t know, though. It&#8217;s still likely to be the first thing that gets read, so I suppose you want it to be as intriguing as possible.</p>
<p>I don&#8217;t really know the answer to your question, but I hope that helps.</p>
<p>Good luck!
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		<title>Comment on The difference between &#8220;Hooks&#8221; and &#8220;Synopsis&#8221; by Bobbie Blue Eyes</title>
		<link>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/02/18/the-difference-between-hooks-and-synopsis/#comment-8</link>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Feb 2007 14:25:10 +0000</pubDate>
		<guid>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/02/18/the-difference-between-hooks-and-synopsis/#comment-8</guid>
					<description>The hook is more akin to the cover blurb – it’s a teaser to make someone want to read the story. It’s what you use to attract an end-user reader. So you give them a taste of what they might encounter, without giving away the end. 

The synopsis is the story, but told in a highly condensed nuts&#38;bolts way. It’s what you use to attract an agent or publisher, and its purpose is to show them you have a complete story. A synopsis doesn’t need to include every twist and thread, but it should demonstrate that your story has a middle and an end (the sample chapters will show the beginning), and enough interest to keep someone reading. In that respect, you have to tell them how it ends. Don’t try teasing them with a ‘You’ll never believe how this ends!!!’ type of synopsis because the strong possibility is that they’ll just chuck it back at you. They need to know it’s something they can confidently sell and, if they're going to invest time in reading your full ms, they want to know in advance that it has a plausible and satisfactory ending.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The hook is more akin to the cover blurb – it’s a teaser to make someone want to read the story. It’s what you use to attract an end-user reader. So you give them a taste of what they might encounter, without giving away the end. </p>
<p>The synopsis is the story, but told in a highly condensed nuts&amp;bolts way. It’s what you use to attract an agent or publisher, and its purpose is to show them you have a complete story. A synopsis doesn’t need to include every twist and thread, but it should demonstrate that your story has a middle and an end (the sample chapters will show the beginning), and enough interest to keep someone reading. In that respect, you have to tell them how it ends. Don’t try teasing them with a ‘You’ll never believe how this ends!!!’ type of synopsis because the strong possibility is that they’ll just chuck it back at you. They need to know it’s something they can confidently sell and, if they&#8217;re going to invest time in reading your full ms, they want to know in advance that it has a plausible and satisfactory ending.
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		<title>Comment on The difference between &#8220;Hooks&#8221; and &#8220;Synopsis&#8221; by Essie</title>
		<link>http://talentedcafe.co.uk/blog/2007/02/18/the-difference-between-hooks-and-synopsis/#comment-5</link>
		<pubDate>Sun, 18 Feb 2007 11:29:17 +0000</pubDate>
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					<description>Did that help?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Did that help?
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